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Paul Cassidy's avatar

That is childhood nostos for me! Firstly, for the first few lines that my mother used to recite to me as a very small boy, although I didn’t understand them. And then to a Sixth Form inter school Classics evening, long ago, where I read this poem to the assembled students, not, I’m sad to say, with your elegance!

It will always be my favourite poem of Catullus.

Joanna Milne 🏺's avatar

I’ve visited Sirmione and the grotto and it is indeed exquisite

Lex Paulson's avatar

A pearl of isles, a pearl of a translation. The 'limping iambic' is a wonderful discovery, I am reading this just after arriving home to Paris from a harrowing week in Ukraine -- that penultimate drift, perfectly like falling into bed. Merci !

Nicholas Coulson's avatar

A delight; thank you for the perfect summer poem.

David Wilson's avatar

Thank you. So this is where the Tennyson comes from.

"Sweet Catullus's all-but-island, olive-silvery Sirmio."

Hard to say who was the better poet!

Nancy Sherman's avatar

Yes, what a pearl of a translation. Thank you for an uplifting homecoming. I wish I could say my mother recited those lines to me! But no such luck.

Irwin and Cita Stelzer's avatar

Wonderful: thank you. I always learn so much from your postings.

Armand D'Angour's avatar

So pleased!

Jonathan Hadfield's avatar

recitatio et translatio tuae me valde delectant! hoc parvum carmen Catulli perpetuam quandam animo meo spirat atque desiderium vehementer Arcadiae commovet amissae. o carissime Catulle!

Armand D'Angour's avatar

gratias tibi semper

Anthony Holmes's avatar

It is one of my favourite Latin poems, with the Choliambic metre suggesting the dragging of weary feet after a long day of travel.

Anthony Holmes's avatar

Especially in the antepenultimate line “Salve, O venusta Sirmio, atque ero gaude”, as the multiple elisions have the effect of slowing the line down. At least that’s how I read it!

Denis Brault's avatar

I had almost as much joy in listening to you as Catullus did on returning home to his bed (too bad Lesbia wasn't in it!)

Armand D'Angour's avatar

She will be😆

John_B (Zeitwende)'s avatar

Or another girl. It was wonderful to listen and read. And seeing Catullus switch from singular to plural, from "I" to "we", when he reaches the "desired bed", my fantasy mistranslation is that "Lydiae" is the genitive of her name, so "the waves of Lydia's lake", which enjoy a spot of undulation, is a double entendre.

Jonathan Hadfield's avatar

nescioquo modo nomen ‘aestatem ‘ cum ‘perpetuam quandam’ caeca oblivione devotus’ omisisse videor. mea culpa!

Jonathan Hadfield's avatar

nescioquo modo nomen ‘aestatem ‘ cum ‘perpetuam quandam’, “caeca oblivione devotus,” omisisse videor. mea culpa!

Armand D'Angour's avatar

‘animam’ intellexi quasi <animam> animo per haplographiam omissum