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Cambrinus's avatar

And I like that rhyme scheme of yours. Not quite a sonnet, but close.

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Armand D'Angour's avatar

Thank you - yes I wanted it to follow the lines closely and rhyme as well, so it falls into a pattern of 3-3-3-2-2.

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William Knight-Hughes's avatar

This is very nutritious stuff

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Marie Lester's avatar

I had to smile…

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